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FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 8/16 #84915 02/17/12 02:01 PM
Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia Female Hawk OP Kerth
OP Female Hawk Kerth Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia	Comments go here. Corrina.

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 8/16 #84916 02/17/12 07:14 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Glad to see the new post. I am looking forward to what happens next. So far it seems like an interesting set up. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 8/16 #84917 02/20/12 03:46 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,804 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,804 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast	Waiting patiently. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 8/16 #84918 02/20/12 02:22 PM
Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 400 Likes: 1 ~Philadelphia, PA AmyPrime Beat Reporter
AmyPrime Beat Reporter Joined: Mar 2008 Posts: 400 Likes: 1 ~Philadelphia, PA	I don't want it to be Barry. I want Barry to be a nice guy whom Lois never noticed! But it seems unlikely to be Paul, given that he's chosen to go away for the weekend. On the other hand, it seems like this weekend away may be a change from the original timeline, so maybe it is him? Hm.

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 8/16 #84919 02/21/12 03:10 PM
Joined: Jan 2011 Posts: 966 Wyoming AntiKryptonite Features Writer
AntiKryptonite Features Writer Joined: Jan 2011 Posts: 966 Wyoming	Boy, a lot going on in this chapter. I love the way Lois and Clark follow their prey..erm, I mean, assignments...together and how they keep up a constant stream. It's very much like they were in the show, I think, and quite a welcome change from how alone Clark was earlier. I was really thinking Barry was Tempus, but now--now that they think he might be Tempus, interestingly--I'm not so sure. When Lois ran into him at the drugstore, he wanted to walk her home, and from our Lois's memories, it seems he probably was interested in her. I feel kind of bad for him after hearing how abruptly she cut him off. Good thing our Clark is more persistent. I'm worried for the younger Lois and hope they find out what's happening soon. I have a bad feeling about them sneaking into Paul's office--but only because they jinxed it by saying it would be easy!

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 8/16 #84920 02/22/12 09:06 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,070 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,070 Likes: 31	Quote From beyond the hotel room door, Clark detected a sound and focussed his vision through the wall. He watched with interest as young Lois crept along the corridor and leant her ear against the door. Quote "Listened at the door." Lois grinned. "If she'd come fifteen minutes ago ..." Quote "There was Lana Lang." "Tell me about her." Danger! Danger! Quote "She was pretty ... in a cardboard kind of way." Quote "I like women with a lot more depth than that." Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 8/16 #84921 02/27/12 11:57 AM
Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia Female Hawk OP Kerth
OP Female Hawk Kerth Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia	Laura I'm glad you find the set up interesting. I was concerned about how long it took to get things set up the way I needed them. Morgana LOL I'm glad you're waiting patiently Amy Quote I don't want it to be Barry. You often see good in my potential bad guys! AntiK Quote I feel kind of bad for him after hearing how abruptly she cut him off. Good thing our Clark is more persistent. Or perhaps, with a little more maturity, Lois will realise that she missed a quiet/good man (Barry) while she chased after Paul. This Lois was always more interested in Clark than she was in Superman (see Story 2 - First Days in Metropolis.) Of course, the Barry Lois knew may not be the Barry Young Lois knows Michael Loved you reactions! You're very good at using graemlins to express yourself. Re the to Barry inspecting something on the ground - the answer will come in part 10. Thanks to all for the comments, Corrina.

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 8/16 #84922 02/29/12 09:29 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,070 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,070 Likes: 31	Quote You're very good at using graemlins to express yourself. Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 8/16 #84923 04/08/13 05:44 AM
Joined: Dec 2012 Posts: 188 MEXICO chelo Hack from Nowheresville
chelo Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Dec 2012 Posts: 188 MEXICO	.Now I understand why Clark brings Lois to 1985... and yeah!! It WAS for fun!!! Jijijiji.... I'm worried about young Lois health.... what's wrong with her??? And I believe Tempus hasn't appeared yet... Clark: "So what are you saying? I should go crawling back on my hands and knees?" Martha: "No, honey. Fly back. It's faster!!"

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