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FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 15/16 #85177 03/19/12 12:00 PM
Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia Female Hawk OP Kerth
OP Female Hawk Kerth Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia	Comments go here. I'll try to have the final part up within a couple of days. Corrina.

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 15/16 #85178 03/19/12 04:51 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Holy crap! What a twisted chapter! Wow poor clark. they will have to go back and undo Clarks injection. But I have a feeing you want to torture us a bit first. More soon. laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 15/16 #85179 03/20/12 10:11 AM
Joined: Aug 2009 Posts: 338 elizabeth Beat Reporter
elizabeth Beat Reporter Joined: Aug 2009 Posts: 338	I'm lost for words! OK, so Paul did turn out to be Tempus, but that ending!!! Wow! Didn't expect that. You sure don't pull any punches! I am so keen to see how you are going to sort that in the next part that I keep coming back to check if it has been posted yet. Wonderful writing as usual Corrina! Cheers Elizabeth

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 15/16 #85180 03/21/12 10:57 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,070 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,070 Likes: 31	Quote "What did you do? On a Saturday afternoon? In 1985?" Oh boy. Is Young Clark going to meet a cougar? Quote Easy. Quick. Safe." Three words everyone normally associates with a Lois. Quote "Probably training," Clark said. "Perfect," Lois said enthusiastically. "Will you take me?" /hands Lois a tissue so she can wipe the drool off/ Quote "You expect me to stand next to you while you ogle some young buck playing football?" Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 15/16 #85181 03/23/12 04:11 PM
Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 581 Sugar Land, TX A amberlea Columnist
amberlea Columnist A Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 581 Sugar Land, TX	ACK! So many changes to the timeline...Lois and Clark have changed things that Tempus couldn't possibly have accounted for. So that gives me hope. But that doesn't mean I can be any more patient for the next part! Amber

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 15/16 #85182 03/24/12 02:37 PM
Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 377 USA S sarahg Beat Reporter
sarahg Beat Reporter S Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 377 USA	waiting!!

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 15/16 #85183 03/26/12 12:35 AM
Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia Female Hawk OP Kerth
OP Female Hawk Kerth Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,181 Likes: 29 SW Vic, Australia	I have been working on the final part, but I'm still not entirely happy with it. Sorry for the delay - it shouldn't be too much longer. Corrina.

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 15/16 #85184 03/26/12 03:49 AM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada J jackiek Merriwether
jackiek Merriwether J Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada	Oh wow! So many surprises. I didn't see any of that coming. Can't wait to see how they get themselves out of this and who shot Tempus? Jackie Superman: I hear you've been looking for me. Lois: All my life.

Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 15/16 #85185 04/07/12 06:46 PM
Joined: Jan 2011 Posts: 966 Wyoming AntiKryptonite Features Writer
AntiKryptonite Features Writer Joined: Jan 2011 Posts: 966 Wyoming	Wow, what a surprising part! I love that Lois wanted to see young Clark, that she got to cheer him up and encourage him a bit--a very well done bit of parallel writing there--but from then on, my eyes just kept getting wider and wider. So Tempus was Paul, but I was a bit confused as to why Lois didn't recognize him as Paul. Have her memories already started to change, was whatever allowed him to look like Paul wearing off, or is it just that he's so clearly a different person even with the outward guise of Paul? How terrifying to hear Tempus spell out a future of two Clarks and one Lois (I knew he'd go for something more than a gun and a bullet). It made chills run through me. The way he pulled out the Kryptonite the first time was so casual that I knew he must have something more planned, but some kind of red Kryptonite potion? I'm terrified for what comes next. Will this altered Clark be wrapped up in the next part, or will it be the plot of the next story in this series? Can't wait to see what happens next!

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