Lois & Clark Forums Forums Fan Fiction Lois & Clark Fanfic FDK - Wrong Clark (6/??)

Wrong Place, Wrong Time, Wrong Clark TOC can be found Here



Comments?

Can I just say that it helps having just watched the pilot on the Hub last night? Nice refresher. I know exactly where the differences are now, and wow! You did pretty great. This should fun!! But Clark's too gentlemanly for that, isn't he? Drat.

Great chapter! And I will be reading it as you post it immediately, so... Until tomorrow then!

Just a minor question. I'm a little confused as to why Alt-Clark and Lois would have memories of Superman eating the bomb. Unless canon Lois told Alt-Clark about it during her brief visit. But Lois' time alterations took place after this occured so it seems like she shouldn't have any lingering memories. (I love this stuff.)

Joan

Both alt-Clark and canon Clark ate bombs on their inital outtings as Superman :rolleyes: . Alt-Clark at the Mayoral Debate. Canon Clark on the Prometheus transport. Lois is remembering her Clark eatting the bomb, not alt-Clark.

Mouserocks: It's always nice to wake up to FDK, but this morning it was SUPER FDK. Thank you.

Thank you. Yep, some differences are subtle (placement of lines, and/or who spoke them), some a bit more noticeable.

Me, too.

No, he doesn't mean being outted as Superman. He means if he fails at rescuing the transport as his first mission as Superman, he won't be much of a super man in the eyes of the people of this dimension. Plus, Lois will be dead, and he'll blame himself... so doubly bad.

Sure, Superman, if that's the only way.

over him in the Suit. He's ready for the same expression when he's Clark Kent.





"I don't know. What's sex? Would you like to show me?" Oooops. Wrong boards. (Me, too.)

Lois doesn't have the mental ability to keep her emotions off her face at the moment.



Thank you. Yep, Part 7 will be posting late tonight. Part 8 - late tomorrow night. Then nothing more until late Sunday night.

Nicely done.

I especially liked the closing - Let's go to my place, not the Planet.

</font><blockquote><font size="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><hr /><font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Originally posted by KenJ:
<strong> Nicely done.

I especially liked the closing - Let's go to my place, not the Planet.

I'd forgotten about Alt-Clark's first events . If Lois can remember the original time line, why can't others like Perry and Jimmy? Is it because she's traveled during that time line? Kinda of like Men in Black 3?

Joan

I haven't seen MIB 3 (probably wait for the video), but I do understand it has something to do with time-travel.

Lois has echoes of her original memories (I call them echoes, because they are more feelings at this point than actual memories) while the others do not, because she was WITH Clark in the past at the point when time changed, so those memories stuck with her. Everyone else's memories have been rewritten over (thus replacing) the pre-existing memories. Deja vu / intuitive leaps may happen with them as well but not as often (especially as this new version of events unfolds differently) and not as clearly as they do with Lois. How is that for muddying the waters?

Hmm. That depends. Does Lois crave chocolate milk?
I loved picking up on them all.
It might give him an excuse to go to the bathroom at any given point in the time for the rest of his life. Super explosive gas issues... It could just be me. But it sounds as if "interview you for the Planet" is more like "um... *interview* you... on behalf of all the women on the planet."
OH! Charlie!! Somehow, everytime you've said Chuck is short for Charles I'm like, "well yeah, but what does that have to do with anything?" :rolleyes: Wow. Charlie *King*. How slow am I?
Yes, but nobody's seen the suit yet in this world. It's quite impressive. He can't expect her to get over it and fall for Clark just yet. (Especially when the last thing he said to her was "Snob")
He-heh. When she finds out it was Clark playing dumb, she'd kill him.
I don't know why you keep reminding me of that. I'm purposely ignoring that last part so that I can claim ignorance and complain loudly the whole time when you're not posting. But brownie points to you for posting so many in a row!

Wait! Four days is a long time between picking up Lois now and dropping her off at the Planet later... he really *is* going to go to her place?!

My place.

Wow. This Lois is a bit more aggressive with Superman then our Lois. I like it! Laura

This was fun. Well done.

My two favorite lines were:

Interesting how your use of a question mark there makes it so much funnier than if you'd put a period. Love that she asks herself why she would think that he would eat the bomb. Clark's "not this time" was cute, too.

Clark's mistake and quick cover-up were funny, but the "as if she would confuse her planet with any other" just cracked me up.

Looking forward to reading more...

Vicki: Thank you. Glad you're enjoying it.

Thanks. Clark was trying to avoid the previous unconscious he fell into at the Mayoral debate (of course, that was due more to Kryptonite, but why take the chance). Of course, he did get a bit of Lois mouth-to-mouth out of it, so maybe he was actually faking. Nah, he wouldn't do that.

Thanks. More giggles posting tonight. Reminds me, need to prep tomorrow's part. (Tonight's ready to go.)

Well, this Lois has already fallen for Superman, she's already done the wallflower bit, she's passed that. Let's just think of it as long-term repressed memories. Short term repressed memories would be that CK=S; a lot more informative, but not as sticky.

Mouse is back!

She likes chocolate milk, she craves chocolate ice cream.



Wasn't this given as a reason for him for him being outted? Let's see... 100 Ways to Reveal a Hero Ah, yes, #59:
Hey, wait a minute. Mouse, that was your suggestion!



She's been in his arms for three monthes? Or just saw 90 sunsets?

No, technically, the last thing she said to Clark was something along the lines as "We're not partners" as the elevator doors slamed in his face. Here it is:

Well, I was close.

Wouldn't one of them already be dead because of the curse, anyway? <<ducking>>

Well, technically, I may have put in your FDK response, but it was meant for everybody, because I forgot to mention it on my initial post.

Are you talking about how long you would have waiting between Part 6 & 7 if I wasn't posting tonight? (No, I would have posted tomorrow night as usual, you just would have missed #8 posting on Fri night, it wouldn't have posted until Sun night). Or did you mean in canon? This ISN'T canon dimension; the dominoes have started to fall, things aren't necessarily going to happen as they did originally or even in the same order. Who said he'd take 4 days to get her to the DP?

That makes sense. Lois traveled through time with Clark.

Joan

Great chapter: I really love all the differences with the Pilot: good job!

Thank you.

Duh! OTOH, it might be the secondary burn stage ignition?

Yeah, if it blew up around him that might be kinda awkward to explain.

So, about 10-13 seconds to launch.

How could they do that on the show?

/remembers final scene from James Bond – Moonraker/



Duh. Lois has learned in the past, that if she dresses like a professional, she gets the scoop or interview in question.



Like that wouldn’t be a wasted gift.

Could be a fun game though, for the powers that be: What win’s out, prescient insight into danger or the willingness to ignore said danger?

/Points to playbook, Step 1/

/chokes/ Sounds like Clark won’t have to be patient.

He really is hard to satisfy, isn’t he?

/is not willing to bet used penny on that one/

Ooooh! He’s a Toyota Prius.

How about ‘anatomically correct man’?

Yep, he’ll take that groupie anywhere she wants. Kitchen. Shower. Bedroom. Closet. Rooftop.

Michael