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Re: FDK - Wrong Clark (30/??) #88723 08/17/12 09:46 PM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,085 Likes: 39 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,085 Likes: 39	Quote It always bothered me that Lex shot Menken who was standing right next to Lois with no thought to her safety and then Lois went all "Ooooh, Lex, you saved me!" That's so totally "Gag me with a Spoon!" (Terribly sorry for the 1980s Valley Girl speak, but I couldn't come up with anything more apt.) Oh, wait, this would work: Actually, in Speed (1994), Cop 2 got taken hostage by Bad Guy, Cop 1 shot first his partner in the leg, who then dropped and opened the shot up for taking out Bad Guy. Maybe it was inspired by Lex? Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - Wrong Clark (30/??) #88724 02/26/13 05:42 PM
Joined: Aug 2012 Posts: 2,549 Detroit, Michigan J John Lambert Pulitzer
John Lambert Pulitzer J Joined: Aug 2012 Posts: 2,549 Detroit, Michigan	Quote “Yes, Clark and I often take the stairs. After sitting at one’s desk for hours, it feel good to stretch one’s legs, doesn’t it, Clark?” Lois asked, seeking his approval, and knowing she would get it. I am pretty sure that it should say "it feels good". Quote “Who do you think? The Pied Piper?” Lois said wryly, trying to pull her arm away. If she just get him to point that gun away from her, she could use one of her Taekwondo moves on him. “Superman, of course.” I think it should be "If she could just get". Quote “Let’s just say that’s he’s always there for me when I need him,” she replied. I think it should be "that he's always". Quote Superman? These cyborg boxers couldn’t hurt him, could they? Superman picked up one of them men and dumped into a pile of nearby trash. I think that should be "dumped him into". John Pack Lambert

Re: FDK - Wrong Clark (30/??) #88725 02/26/13 05:51 PM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR OP Nobel Peace Prize Winner
OP VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Quote Originally posted by John Lambert: Quote “Yes, Clark and I often take the stairs. After sitting at one’s desk for hours, it feel good to stretch one’s legs, doesn’t it, Clark?” Lois asked, seeking his approval, and knowing she would get it. I am pretty sure that it should say "it feels good". Quote “Who do you think? The Pied Piper?” Lois said wryly, trying to pull her arm away. If she just get him to point that gun away from her, she could use one of her Taekwondo moves on him. “Superman, of course.” I think it should be "If she could just get". Quote “Let’s just say that’s he’s always there for me when I need him,” she replied. I think it should be "that he's always". Quote Superman? These cyborg boxers couldn’t hurt him, could they? Superman picked up one of them men and dumped into a pile of nearby trash. I think that should be "dumped him into". Thanks, again, John. All fixed. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

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