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Interesting comparison between Nor and the English to describe the American Declaration of Independence.

My, um, Jon isn't shy about letting this stranger and government official (Trey) know every little detail of his relationship with Jen, is he? I recognized much of this story from the Matchmaker Chronicals, although there was a bit more here than I think Jon would say or Trey might want to hear. I know I'd feel uncomfortable if someone I just met came up to me and told me how his or her body reacted when first meeting his or her spouse. Of course, Jon *is* a scientist, not a writer, like his folks, so maybe isn't embarrassed by these details.

I'm glad New Krypton is considering changing away from the infant marriage pair bonding.

Let's see if the oldest grandchild is about to turn 14 and the youngest has only just been announced, how many grandchildren do Lois and Clark have at this point? I do remember that they had quite a few once all things were said and done.

Hi Virginia,

Thanks for the FDK!

Jon was emphasizing the strength of the connection to convince Trey and the other Elders of the veracity of the pair bond felt by the soul mates. If you recall the pair bonding ceremony was only the first step the second being the marriage bed. He wanted Trey to know that the desire to consummate the pair bond was there.

One more to go and there just might be some surprises in store. Sixteen days, I think I can do it.

So, what have you set up for part 8? Or should I say ‘who’?

Establishing a penal colony for incorrigible New Kryptonian’s in Antarctica? I’m sure there’s nothing that could ever go wrong with that.

So, they’re going to use soul-detectors to find bond-mates?

Sounds like they have a pretty good system. Why change it?

Also, I’m guessing usually they’re not separated at birth but kept close together?

So, George Washington is Lord Nor and Thomas Jefferson is Jen May? That’s not going to help making the New Kryptonian’s feel sympathetic to the US.

/imagines a duel between Washington and King George (?)

/imagines Trey hearing ‘we celebrate the day our nation went to war against their parent nation’/ This is *so* not going to help.

Umm…Jon?

Michael

Hi Michael,

Thanks for the FDK!

Yes, after her freshman year when they became engaged she was brought in on the family secret so she knew where to direct her anger at the death of her parents. It took her a while to get over it and realize that even super beings can't be everywhere and save everyone all the time.

I have about sixteen days to get the final story done.

There will be some surprises in it.

Ah yes. I guess they helped in their own way with the five stages of grief.

Michael

Hi Michael,

This was a special circumstance. The anger phase lasted longer because she had a focus for her anger. It took a while for her to get past it.

He had to be patient and supportive through that time.

Awwwww Michael

Special note:

My beta reader is back from vacation and has part nine. Look for it in a few days.

It has been posted.