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Hmm, actually, that was longer and more intense than a lot of dates. And they even kissed. Still, it was a deception kiss, however what a kiss.

On the whole I liked HiM, although I think I confuse some scense there with ones in The Source from season 2. Do they both have scenes where Clark ex-rays through a wall and then at some point sees Lois' bones as she tries to bring him back to reality, or just one.

Wait, does she actually do that in "Requium for a Superhero". I knew I really disliked the whole shooting scene in there. I also figured that it was partly because Clark seemed to needless waste time celebrating defeating 3 cyborgs when he should be rushing off to save Lois. That always seemed odd to me, especially because it was the only time he really seemed to celebrate a victory as Superman, especially when Lois was not yet safe.

Now I wonder if Clark should have learned from RFASH that he should carry a gun and use it from time to time, than maybe Lois will call him "my hero" as well.

Does it say something about Lois maybe not being her self that I am thinking the "my hero" line sounds more like hypnotized, amnisiac Lois interacting with Dr. Deter?

It was an accident, honestly. Also, that means I should FDK while reading the first time, then?

Yes, unless one already got hired thugs on the payroll and can have them deliver the goods and prep them so there won’t be effort required. On an unrelated subject, Nigel recently oversaw the installation of chains in Lex’s sleep chamber.

Clones? Surgically modified look-alikes? He could still do things once a year and on the plus side, he could make a killing when he’s done.



Nitpicky much?

Michael

It was, wasn't it? Sigh.

Nope. HiM (to my recollection) has him tempted to x-ray into the next room, but he stops himself before he sees anything.

Yep. Which is why it doesn't happen in my story.

Well, I don't know about celebrating his victory over the cyborgs. More like: okay, that's done, where's Lois?

I think that would be just weird.

True, but she was reacting to Luthor killing Menken, who had just dragged her through the alley. Personally, for a supposed karate expert and usually tough woman, the whole scenario and line was totally . She never said anything so gushy, pathetic, and whimpy female to Superman. It was a total slap in his face, which why combined with the boxers made this episode not one of my favorites.

Michael: FDK-FDK-FDK... Time 2.

I leave that up to the Reader. I find it hard to stop reading to FDK in the middle.

They are handy, aren't they?

Only in the manor house, not the penthouse.

LEX: Not quite the same. I like the psychological damage done to the real thing.



Hmmm. I wonder....

LOIS: No?

SUPERMAN: No!

LOIS: Clark said he'd be...

SUPERMAN: He most certainly did not!

LOIS: Gotcha. <sigh>

SUPERMAN: Trust me, Lois, it works better if you don't put us together in a room together.

LOIS: <suspeciously> Why's that?

SUPERMAN: I believe someone is calling for help?

LOIS: Convenient.

LOIS: Hello? No, he's not!

HENDERSON: Not in this EW's stories.

LOIS: Actually, now that you mention it. They didn't! Wouldn't know? My Hubby's been working 14 hour days this week. I don't think either of us are happy about it.

It depends. When I have Word open, it’s a question of whether I want to ignore my inner voice or not want to die of an aneurism.

He is hard to please, isn’t he?

You can disinfect your knee afterwards.

Michael

In that case, please don't choose 'death by aneurism.'

LEX: Actually not. I just enjoy the simple pleasures in life.

<Phew>

So, eating meteorite is a bad thing? Gotcha. Explains why none of the villains chose it as their means to defeat Superman.

I've really got to read me some of her stories.

CLARK: What? So, do it while I still have the chance?

She doesn't get amnesia in S1.

yeah, I can see how that would be a bad choice.

Actually, from the looks of the Kryptonite, I always figured it’d shatter like glass, including the small, sharp shards.

Oh dear. /watches in growing panic as Virginia goes into hibernation for several months/



Yes?

Michael

Actually, I found a Wendy Richards distraction yesterday called "Poision" (dark side) which had Clark swallowing Kryptonite fragments. Let's just say, the results weren't exactly what Lex had in mind.

At the moment I'm only allowing myself small doses of distraction (see above). I'm not allowing hibernation until I've finished my story. Then I might turn from EW to ER for a while until hit over the head with another plot bunny.

LEX: And you expect me to admit to that?

And here I thought you might head the other direction and think "Ghost Clark" giving her ideas. Of course, he's dead.

Again? Hmmmm, that's strange, that wasn't in my outline the last time I looked at it. <shrugs> Well, if the outline says they're supposed to do it then, I must have changed it at some point. Silly me, thinking someone hacked into my computer and changed my outline on me. *Nobody* would do that, would they? Would they?

Michael

Don't panic, Michael. After I finish Book2, I still have Book 3 to write. And there was that sequel to Missing Lois I promised. <<watch my relaxing ER status drift off into the sunset>> Oh, well.

We really need to get people to post more often than once a week, because otherwise we have nights like tonight when nobody has posted ANYTHING for like hours. <Okay, sure, there was a presidential debate, and for people who don't realize ignorance is bliss, that might be important> Sometimes, I get sick of seeing just my siggy.

Ghost Clark failed the consumation test? Poor fellow. Pretty funny that he did, BTW, because I hear that Lana gets her way no matter what.

The discussion of RFSH reminded me of something. Sometimes Season 1 Lois gets credit as the toughest. However it is actually in season 2 where we see her save Superman by digging a kryptonite bullet out of his shoulder, and with the Prankster and goon subdue them before Superman arrives.

Your Lois is doing much better at being a tough as nails reporter than Canon Season 1 Lois. She even figured she could escape from Bain's chains.

It's been a LONG, long time since I've watched the Prankster episodes, so I don't remember her subduing them. Actually, I remember more from the "Return of the Prankster" than the original. I really should rewatch that one.

Thank you. I'm glad I haven't turned her into a softy.

LOIS: Who's this Bain guy? And why is he chaining me up? Oh, you mean that criminal from Gotham City? No, I missed that exclusive.

CLARK: Thank heaven for small miracles.

I meant Toni Baines. I forgot that her name had an s on the end. Silly me.

Yes, in The Prankster, Lois knocks out the badguys, and when Superman comes to save her, she tells him that she has things under control, but that he should still stay around.

Wheeeeewwwww



Except when she doesn’t Michael

I forgot about her.

Thanks for the refresher. I really should watch that episode again, anyway. <feigning distress> Oh, the torture.

Hmmmm. I'm thinking that Michael is already eyeing the next ride while sitting at the top of the current roller coaster.

Maybe canon Lana was like canon Lois as Alt-Lana was more like alt-Lois in ML? /In other words maybe Lana forgot to demand her rights as a girlfriend? or waited for Clark to make his move? Lana -> /

I got the impression from "Tempus Anyone" that canon-Lana was very demanding. She was able to demand her way into being a wedding guest.

Maybe Clark was just so distant that even in her demanding phase she never demanded that. The only clear indication is she never got that.

It looks so close from up here, you can almost touch it.

Michael