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Comments here, please! I love these seasonal challenges. Thanks to DC, for creating the new list. cool


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What a cute story! A super-secret tooth puller that appears every fall around halloween. Wonder why no one else told us that secret?

Fun story. Thanks for it.
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clap Adorable! Well done! An enjoyable read.

[Linked Image] Don't tell my daughter!


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Thanks to DC, for creating the new list.
You're quite welcome! Look for a winter/holiday challenge to pop up soon (I want to give people plenty of time with the holidays and everything).


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"Look, Mommy! Look! Look!"
So...Clark Jr? Lois Jr?

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Lois turned and faced her little boy with a look of surprise.
Awww!

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It was Jonny's third week of kindergarten, and already he'd been complaining of jealousy towards his fellow classmates who'd begun to lose their baby teeth.
Hmm...seems maybe a bit early. I was going to guess "super genetics" on this one.

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Lois chuckled silently to herself at his competitiveness-- definitely a Lane trait. Knowing her son, he'd probably been working at that tooth since the first time he heard another kid mention the idea.
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from kicking at the most inopportune moments,
So, he didn't let Lois speak when she won her Pulitzer then?

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What would teenage Jonathan be like?
With any luck - a lot like his Daddy.

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She couldn't actually tell whether the tooth was loose or not.
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he was ambushed by a bounding ball of speed and excitement.
And that's just cause he's a kid, forget the super genes! wink

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And Grandma has a very special, super-secret solution for getting out loose teeth.
Super-sticky caramel apples? wink

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He'd considered trying to reach Grandma Martha, but he wasn't allowed to use the phone, and he didn't know their number anyway.
No speed dial then? wink

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Uncle Jimmy didn't have any idea what they were talking about-- and he'd asked several times now during today's babysitting venture, with no result.
laugh Poor Jimmy!

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The cry that broke his heart and scared him half to death.
So...what did Jon do to himself?

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Whatever or whoever was hurting him would be in for a world of hurt when he found him.
See, now that's that Kryptonian instinct Ching was trying to bring out in him when prepping him to dual with Nor... wink

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"Mommy and Daddy awe at work still. Unca Jimmy's hewe with Ella, but I sneaked away to find you," he lowered his voice to a conspiratorial whisper, a mischievious grin alighting his face.
Oh boy.

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Then the fire was back in him, all traces of embarrassment gone.
Yup. All Lane there.

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There was no doubt about it-- this was Lois Lane's son.
Hey! I just said that! laugh

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Jonathan crossed his arms over his chest Superman style and gave the hero a suspicious Lane glare. "What's so funny, Supaman?"
Ahahahaha!

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"You could punch me!"
Ahahahahahahahaha! <computer monitor would be covered in liquid if I was drinking anything at the moment>

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Lois would have killed me if anything had happened to him-- and they wouldn't find a body, you know--"
Seriously ROTFLMAO here.

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"Gwandmaaaaaaa!" he sing-songed as he knocked on the screen door.
And just like that, Superman is forgotten. Hehehe!

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Clark chuckled as Martha spoke, "He's such a funny young thing. Cares more about that loose tooth than Superman himself."
Well, a loose tooth *is* a rite of passage.

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Jonathan thought about it and decided that dessert took priority over his tooth.
Of course, dessert *is* very important too.

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On it sat the biggest, gooiest caramel apple he'd ever seen.
jawdrop I swear, I did NOT read ahead when making the caramel apple joke earlier!

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Embedded in the caramel, just where he had tried to take a bite out of the apple, was his tooth.
Here I thought he was gonna close his eyes and Clark super speed/yank it out. wink

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"Can we get, like, a hundwed of these to go? I got a lot more teeth to get out."
Awww! Too cute! Great job, Mouse! Please, tell me you have more ideas floating around with that wonderful muse of yours!

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A/N: This is in response to Deadly Chackram's Fall Ficathon Challenge- Prompt #28: Caramel Apples.
Ha! I totally forgot about that prompt!


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I have to join others in saying I loved this story. I have to agree Jonathan Kent here is clearly Lois' son.


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Just adorable all around!


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Mouse,

Well done!!!

Wonderful story.

Are there any more lurking in that fertile brain?


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My, this is story is pure cuteness. I loved every line of it!


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This was totally a sweet story!

Lois is right to shudder! That son of hers is a character!

You should write more WAFFY fare like this, Mouse. smile1


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"It's my tooth! My tooth is loose! See?!"
/cocks eyebrow/

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Lois turned and faced her little boy with a look of surprise.
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