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Sorry, I meant to post this this earlier

PJ

Hey Pam, nice finish..

~Liz

I'm sorry I missed commenting on Part 9.

Two great sections here, Pam, and I love how you're edging them ever closer even now that they're dating. That Lois felt comfortable enough to get into bed with Clark, and then stay there in the morning and enjoy a little cuddling, shows how far she's come since H. And how far Clark's come, too, since he so clearly didn't assume, when Lois insisted that they needed to get up, that it meant she was running away from him again! Best of all, though, you've left us some loose ends for K: there's Lex Luthor, and there's Lois's still-evident discomfort about Clark's mother; she doesn't quite believe that everything's fine there. That could be rather interesting in a future story!

But, also, what of Trask now? Does he exist at all in Pam's Alphabet Universe? Or will he sneak up on Clark when we're least expecting it - in L is for Lunatic, perhaps? Or X is for Xenophobe? Or C is for Conspiracy-Theorist?

Roll on K!!!!! (...is for Kryptonite? I don't think so, since we've already had Kryptonite in this story, and Pam is never that predictable. Hmmm... K is for Klein? K is for Kinky? K is for Kill Clark Kent? )


Wendy

Yay!!!

Soon with K!!

I would like to know about Perry's reunion with Legal Department and how L&C handle the newsroom

Jose

Yay, Pam! A delightful end to a delightful story. Sherry mentioned in her part 9 comments that she was going to be disappointed when this ends because it's been so much fun, and if you'll recall, that's exactly what I said as I was reading it section by section. I wanted to know what came next, but I also wanted you to keep going! I absolutely adore these two and following them in their universe. We're just lucky there are a lot of letters left to go. <g> And I've already got dibs on BRing "K"!

Kathy (who knows what K will stand for, but thinks Wendy's "Kill Clark Kent" is funny enough to warrant a title change. LOL!)

Oh, whew. I was so afraid that someone would steal the Kryptonite from the car. I don't know how anyone would know about it, but you never know. It's a great ending to J... and a great intro to K! So when are we going to see it?

Oh, this story was just a delightful holiday present to us. Thank you Pam!

Hi,

Great part.

MAF

Cute finish can't wait for K! Laura

Solid finish. The relationship moves ever forward.

K is for Kryptonite is the natural, so it will have to be something else. I like K is for Kill Jimmy Olsen, but that's just me.

Tank (who says it's not known if the Kryptonite is still in the car, no one checked on it, hmmmmm)

It's a delight watching Lois and Clark's budding relationship here. Loved the morning cuddle.

Great series, Pam.

And now for K... will there be a klone or a krazy in it?

gerry

This was so much fun, Pam. And I love the innovative little gifties, like having him know he's recovered his powers by overhearing the other driver's mumbling.

Great plot and really satisfying L&C interaction.

Best,
Sherry

Pam

I'm sorry for not commenting on every part.
I've just managed to catch up.

WOW! This is fantastic. I'm so glad that there's more to come.

As for, K is for Kryptonite! I think K is for Kindred Spirits, or K is for Kissing, are much better choices.

Tricia

I just remember I hadn't left any feedback here, even when I read it Friday already and found it a very nice ending. Okay, with lots of stuff to be covered in K.

The entire conversation in the car was superb and witty: the chat about camping, the racing with the other guy and the exit coming pretty soon <g>. Just great.

I still wonder about Lex and Perry now. So please hurry up with K! Maybe you can start with telling us what it stands for. Not that guessing is bad, but it gives more to look forward to.

Saskia

Life has been incredibly hectic the last few days, with my hubby on travel, and I haven't left feedback for anyone. My apologies.

A very nice story on the way to Lois and Clark getting together. I eagerly await K.

Nan

Thanks, y'all! If you've had half as much fun reading this as I've had, writing it, then... I guess I've had twice as much fun as you <g>

Yes, I have K plotted in my head (in broad overview; the details will be a nice surprise to me!), but I haven't got anything written down yet. And I have ideas I want to play with for L, M, and N, as well... <g> Though I still have no idea how I ended up re-writing first season

Well, I'm glad you like the dangling threads thing, since it was your fault that I left those ends loose! There I was, trying to write the wrap-up at the farm scene, but it just wasn't working... so Wendy says maybe I don't need to address those points yet... I apologize to everyone who was looking forward to it, and I do promise to follow up on that stuff, but it'll be in context of future stories.

And hey, personally I'm pretty pleased about Lois getting off to such a strong start to a friendship with Jonathan!

My theory of episode rewrites is that the changes that make the heros act so very differently have a much lesser effect on the villains. Though I admit I cheated a little by ignoring Smart Kids, and I do feel guilty about that... maybe I'll figure a way to write some reference to it in K <g>

So... yes, he's still out there. Somewhere.

So you think I should tell you what K is for? This speculation is just too fun for me to spoil <g> Honestly, I think the fun possibilities with titles is half the reason I keep writing these things.... but oh, okay... at the moment, unless something cleverer occurs to me, K is for Knot Yet.

Thanks very much, Liz, Wendy, Jose, Kathy, Karen, Joy, Maria, Laura, Tank, Gerry, Sherry, Tricia, Saskia & Nan! Thanks again to everyone who's commented on any of the parts along the way; it's great to know there's an audience

PJ

Pam,
Sorry I'm late in posting
wonderful ending
enjoyed
merry