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- Responce to John's FDK Comments - Cont.

Hank wouldn’t have survived the ensuing fight with Rachel, if he had been so stupid. Lana probably wouldn’t have allowed it either. She might only think of herself, but most women cannot (I hope) ignore another woman screaming “no!”

Heresay. He’s only worried about appearances. Anyway, if she tells that story, he’d probably come up with a worse one about what Rachel had done. (lies, of course).

Seems like a plausible explanation.

Trust me, when someone has been drinking to the point of drunkedness, they don’t sober up THAT quickly and they can stink to high-heaven until they shower and brush their teeth.




Nah. She was there for the full conversation.



Or Hank could just discount anything Lois says for these first few minutes because she just hit her head.

Doubtful.

Lana owes him one for marrying her. Somehow Hank finds it easier to manueuver around Lana’s ultimatums.

But later you suggest that I should move this part back until after Clark hears the explosion. Hmmmm. I’ll continue to think about this.

Maybe. No one knows for sure. Would he get more raditation from a larger chunk? Or the same amount? It’s debatable, which is why Clark doesn’t know (nor wants to test this theory).

I already have a dead Clark in this story, I don’t need two, but that doesn’t mean I won’t torture him a bit or push him to the edge every once and a while.

See, he’ll be fine. Kind of, sort of, not really.

Always good to hear that I got my characterization down.

Hank calling her ‘Missy’ is low down on her pet peeves at the moment. If all this other stuff wasn’t going on, yea, it would be a fair assumption that someone should tell Hank to cover his privates.

LOIS: See, I can think even with a head injury.

That’s because it’s a strange injury.



According to my medical source it’s possible to be shot without realizing it. Remember Forrest Gump got shot several times in the backside and thought he’d only been bitten by bugs.

LOIS: Clark, you worry too much.

CLARK: I worry because I care.
LOIS: Save it for someone who believes that stuff.


She remembers the cover and Clark dances?

Hence the addenum of “face to face”.

Yes, a while back. When Clark was first thinking about why he doesn’t like sweets, I mention that the Kents hit the tree at the base of the driveway, swerving to miss a deer and fawn.

- Responce to John's FDK Comments - Part 3

Actually, this part wasn’t supposed to have a cliffy AT ALL. But then I rewrote the end of this scene which pushed it longer, so I figured… “That’s a good spot”. Pretty Much.


LOIS: I do have other emotions besides anger. I just choose not to use them.

I’m sure that Lois would have a psychic feeling that Dr. Carlin wouldn’t be the right doctor for Clark.

Mr. Irig was shot. Was does that have to do with Clark beating up Trask? True, Trask hasn’t pressed any charges… You’re right. Max is a jerk.

Clark is still technically her partner.




LOIS: What? You think I have a “being rescued” fetish or something?

I promised a lower body count than in “Another Lois” for this story, since we’ve got a living, breathing Clark now.

It saves me one posting every few weeks, but otherwise is the same number of postings as the every third day route.

Sydney: See, I came back.

Pretty much.

Clark. Trask is a colonal in the military after all.

I don't know. You seemed surprised.

Actually...

Michael: I haven't forgotten about you or your FDK. I'll try to get to it tomorrow. My yawns are overtaking me and I have to get up early tomorrow... Monday, again! Why do they keep putting those at the beginning of the week, I'll never know.

/makes note to do future FDKs concise and and to the point, without any senseless rambling, so as not to overtax dear writer/
Because people griped about them when they used to be before the weekend. Ruined the whole thing on a regular basis.

Michael

PS: It's just a lucky coincidence that I'm up to date with WC right now.

PPS: /Diligently files note in circular storage bin./

Michael: Let's see how much I can catch up before people notice, I'm not really helping my daughter with her homework.

You know, they always say that, but having grown up in a rain forest, often trees have moss all around them.

Trask will be happy to hear that they're loyal.

How Lois really made her way through Met U.

CLARK: Yes, sign me up for as a season passholder. What? A life-time pass? Yippie!

Possibly.

Those are posted maximum speeds. Posted minimum speeds generally appear on freeways. They are lower in Iowa than in Illinois, apparently to accomade tractors going on the freeway, or at least that is my theory. A standard freeway in Michigan has 70 mph maximum, 45 mph minimum.

I am not sure that would be th case in rural areas.

So when he runs in the next election he will run as "Your Lawrence County Sherrif" and strategically avoid "re-elect" in his campaign, like my local sherriff (who I hope gets ousted in the election tomorrow, but I am not holding my breath, for some reason lots of people around here like our arrogant county exec, who I refer to as "the king" since he essentially came to power through taking his fathers postion, and he supports the Sherriff, oh well, I can hope for change)

Max: I said no one else reads the Daily Planet. Those others just buy it to look at the pictures. That's my story and I'm sticking to it.

Clark: Hmm, maybe we should cover more Smallville news in the DP, so we get even more Smallville readers.

Lois: You do that Chuck, and leave the Superman in Metropolis stories to me.

Lois: I don't. I am sure it is because he stole someone else's identity and has not worked out his full cover story.

- Responce to Micahel's FDK cont. -

HANK: I never would have done such a thing.

YOUNG WALT:

She didn't really know him. He was popular (why? a mystery of life) and he asked her.

HANK: It wasn't soooo bad.

RACHEL:

LANA: I've had better.

RACHEL:

LANA:

RACHEL:



WALT: What? Did I do something wrong?

Maybe around Lawrence and the other outlying towns.

Well, this was the mid-80s and there was a movie back in the early 80s with Burt Reynolds called “Paternity” (I think I was one of the only people who actually saw this movie), so I’m going to guess “yes”. Although, if you watch the “Tudors” paternity is determined on how much your child is a healthy boy.

WALT: Sounds good to me.

HANK: I’m being polite.

Because even though in his mind he’s old fashioned he lives with a modern woman who hates to be called “Mrs.”

HANK: I don’t know what you’re talking about. Aren’t all beautiful women like this?

THOMAS: Smallville Market?

Thanks. He was supposed to. (And does again now). When I was writing ML, I almost posted a part from Jimmy’s point of view where he referred to Clark as “Clark” instead of CK. Believe it not, I do make mistakes.

MARTHA: No! Not ‘Ironic’ in the least.
CLARK: I’m going to have to side with my new-dimensional mom on this one.
EW: Great idea! <Although, I believe I’ve tortured Jonathan enough already>
CLARK: So you’re saying, since I’m not wearing the suit, I don’t *have* to follow Superman’s credo?

MARTHA: They’re on order for Christmas.

CLARK: Just rub it in, why don’t you?

TRASK: <taking notes> Really?

Um… no, they just met that afternoon.

LOIS: Always mad! Anyway, “Chuck” is an acceptible uncover alias, right?

PERRY:

- Responce to Micahel's FDK cont. -



That’s so clever! </font><hr /></blockquote><font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Yes, I’ve found yet another way to torture Clark.

I knew I had heard that line somewhere else before. On the other hand, what a convenient way to get rid of Trask.

Oh? Is that Lois’s problem?

No super strength.

Oh, dear. Now Clark will expose himself to Kryptonite to go beat up annoying people like Ralph.

Some give away that Clark is stronger than Max?

LOIS: Fine! He’s wanted for “questioning” in the death of George Thompson.

MAX: Yeah, I’ve had days like that.

For wanting to bring Trask in? Oh, dear.

MAX: Sorry, I put on my hat and you couldn’t see my face while I was kissing Colonal Trask’s boots.



Don’t cliffies feel better when the next part isn’t right there to read and have a chance to age?

What? What?! I didn’t see any rambling in your FDK.



Not me. Beta’s keep knocking on my Inbox about Part 66.

Because you’re planning on getting behind again? Where’s the fun in that?

You mean when her report card arrives at the end of the semester?



It was either that or Nascar. And Lois found the latter one boring. Plus, she needed to sharpen her people skills by interrogating her passengers. Even caught a corporate spy and two drug mules that way.

Thank you. I thought so.

No, I think it was from the steering wheel actually.

What? I’m not the one who got sold for 1500 bucks to a billionaire for a night of unbridled passion.

.5 caliber?

Lex?

No, I think you could do it with one person, too. It’s just more entertaining if there’s more people involved.

Oh, Jimmy…

/watches as Darlene switches tapes/

The sheriff, the preacher, and the judge are standing in a cornfield…





OLD HANK: Maybe I can get a divorce, keep Barbie and the rest and marry that Lucy girl…

LANA:
CLARK:
LANA: So, that’s why you’re sleeping on the couch?
LOIS: Did she just call me a hooker?

HANK: You mind if I go watch a bit?

Oh boy.

Michael

Am I allowed a "Duh" here?

Maybe not officially.

Pretty much.

JOAN (from Smallville Mkt): As long as they buy the paper, I don't care what they do with it.

Sounds like something straight out of S1.

CLARK:

Currently she's performing at "above her grade level" so I'm not too worried.

Too slow?



LOIS: Jealous, huh?

TRASK: Sometimes we use 9mm.

LOIS: Michael.

DARLENE: Hey, I've got to send my kids through college somehow.

MAX: What are you saying? That we're all part of some elaborate drinking game?

LUCY: I'll pass. I'd rather not be a nanny-wife.

EW: There's more!

RACHEL: Fine by me, I'm walking home.

WALT: Hank, trying to learn something? <shoos him away> I told you to watch my date, not yours.

Thomas's and Clark's opinions aside, I don't think Rachel was considered in the same catagory as a "Lana" or a "Lois".

Thank you. That was kind of you.

LOIS: Wait! I don't get to sleep with Superman?

CLARK: I think I can arrange that sometime, if you never forgive me for lying.

CLARK: And to think I told the EW you should be allowed a RL.

LOIS: <scoots skirt up thigh> Claaaaark, can you type up this story for me? <<bats eyelashes>>

CLARK: Sure.

JIMMY: I can type.

RALPH: I can fake it.

LOIS: :rolleyes:

Oooooh. Something shiney.

That's still on my 2BRead list. It must be a good one, because many people mention it.

<Nine Months Later> LOIS: <very round in tummy> Nobody warned me that there was side-effects to this stuff.

LOIS: Thanks, Perry, but this wasn't an article, this was my trying to get the sheriff to arrest Trask. Circumstancial evidence or not.

Yes, well it is close. At one point in the discussion of ging to Smallville to cover what was going on at the Irig famr, Lois tells Clark to go and leave him back in Metropolis so she can get Superman stories.

Michael

I forgot about that.

LOIS:

CLARK:

Michael