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Sara, I adore this story! Primarily because it's got such spark, and naturally, I'm a huge believer that Lois has been in love with Clark for a while, but the very idea of it angers her to no end. I particularily like the fact that you're developing the cannon of the show as you progress through the story. Smooth, as First Season Jimmy might say :rolleyes: .

Poor Clark! All he wants to do is talk to her, but everytime he gets the courage, 'Help! Superman!' is echoed through his mind.

And since he isn't talking, we're reading no smoochies, and that is never a good thing!

I'm enjoying this very much, and am excited to read the next part.

-Jo

Well, as I already told you very detailed what I think of it, there no use to repeat it all except that I think it's great! It's written very realistic and I like the use of several scenes from the series. I also noted a lot of potential for whams and angst. <g>

So can we please get more now?

Saskia (who's feeling better after Sara showed her this marvelous piece)

Hi,

Great piece.

More soon, please.

MAF

Oh My poor Clark! I hope she talks to him soon. Laura

oooh!! The Madam-Ex A-plot is here!!

Lois ignoring Clark is princeless but I hope they talk soon

Jose

What a tough day for Lois. Tried to be there first to get the upper hand, but didn't succeed...

Poor Clark, hope Lois talks to him soon and they can sort out their problems.

Good story, post more soon.

Julia

Sara

This is excellent.
Poor Clark! Lois and him definitely need to talk.

I'm looking forward to reading the next part.

Tricia

Still loving this, Sara! I'm a great fan of your writing style; your narrative flows wonderfully and you use some terrific imagery.

Poor Lois! Poor Clark!

MORE!!


Wendy

Things are progressing (well, story-wise if not relationship-wise).

Not a lot of new material since this post was used mostly to use the scenes from Madam Ex to provide the setting for what is to come.

There were a lot of good moments in Madam Ex but hopefully this won't be a slavish recounting of much of that episode (we've all seen it). The fun of using actual scenes from the series is seeing how the writer can take the familiar and then veer off, taking the story in their own direction.

Tank (who wonders if we are going to see a Lois double... maybe Clark would be able to make up with her?)

Hey Jo, Sas, Maria, Laurach, José, Julia, Tricia, Wendy and Tank!

Thank you all so, so much for your wonderful comments! It was so much fun reading them!! And apologies for being this late responding, but I just haven't had the time to look around me... This all made me a little less to post the next part, though there's still a little of that in there... hoping to get around to it today, though

Thanks once again! This really made my Christmas

Sara

Sara
great part
getting caught up
Happy Holidays - late
merry