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So, crossovers are still incredibly hard, but I'm having more fun with it than I expected, too! I hope you're enjoying it as much as I am!

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She above all others knew that no one ever showed the depths of themselves on their surface.
Nice description of how Belle thinks, why she is able to fall in love with Rumplestilskin.


It figures Gold would know about Superman. But how exactly did he figure it out? He wasn't there to see Belle's chains released.


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“What?” Lois snapped, stepping forward to confront Rumplestiltskin directly. “*This* is your big play? Threatening to unmask him to the world? That’ll be kind of hard to do when you don’t want the world to know you exist, won’t it?”
You just have to love Lois for pointing this out.

Oh boy, both men have been backed into a corner, defending their women. This can't be good.

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Cliffhanger ending! Cliffhanger ending!

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Maybe Gold had Clark figured out before he even showed up. I mean, the fact that Clark and Lois cover Superman so much might in and of itself tip someone off.


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“Strangers with secrets in a town full of secrets.”
Exactly.

I've just read parts 3 and 4a, and it felt like both sides were circling each other, always wary.

Until the final bit, of course, when the circling stopped rather abruptly!

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Thank you for the wonderful feedback! I apologize for the delay in the next part -- RL intervened -- but I do thank everyone reading this for their encouragement!

Belle is a singular type of person, scifiJoan, and I figured she would be able to see things others wouldn't! And Lois is another type of singular person, definitely not afraid to call anyone out! smile Belle whispered to Gold that Clark broke her chain, so that combined with whatever his own theories were after looking up Clark Kent and Lois Lane led him to the Secret -- he's a pretty smart guy, after all!

It was a cliff-hanger ending, Iolanthe, and I'm so sorry that it took me this long to get back! blush

Thanks, Female Hawk -- the wary circling was a lot of fun to write, but yeah, the confrontation itself took a LONG time to write!

Thanks, again, for the wonderful feedback!

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Angry, because it was better to be angry than to be afraid.
<nods>

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see Rumplestiltskin remember how to smile when he looked at her.
Awww!

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And like uncounted times in Regina’s cell, her hope was disappointed.
frown

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The woman muttered angry questions and dark imprecations, sounding not unlike Rumplestiltskin in one of his more annoyed moods,
Belle, meet Mad Dog Lane.

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If Rumplestiltskin caught sight of the red ring surrounding her wrist, Storybrooke would be lucky to emerge with just a street or two unscathed.
Too true! clap

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He shot a look to Lois over his shoulder, and she nodded and stepped up close to Belle, her dark eyes demanding Belle’s full attention.
Always covering for him. clap

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Clark’s smile was caught between relief and joy, disbelief and awe
Ah, love that smile of his.

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It was Rumplestiltskin’s smile, the one he gave her when she took his hand or stepped into his embrace or told him she loved him.
Awww! And now I'm sitting in my den, grinning like an idiot. laugh

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Hercules had not always been easy with his godlike powers, either, if Belle remembered correctly.
Hehehe!

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If she was careful. If she was slow, cautious, smart.
Check on all of those. You're good to go, Belle.

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She knew that he would look at strangers in his way and see only an obstacle to be removed; he would look at strangers with a dangerous secret and see opportunities to be found and weaknesses to be taken advantage of.
True.

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“I don’t know what you think you saw,” Lois said boldly,
A for effort, Lois.

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and his high-pitched giggles
These make my husband and me laugh every time!

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It appears I can’t escape exceptionally strong knights in shining armor no matter how many worlds I visit…*Superman*.
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It does make me wonder, though…just how much would a man give in order to keep his secret safe from others who *don't* possess the advantage of extraordinary hearing?
Do I smell a Rumple deal?

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“Enough!” Rumple snapped, and there was more than fear in his voice--there was sheer terror.
Ooooh! clap

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Rumplestiltskin never lied, not outright, not without the use of half-truths and misdirections
<also points to Clark>

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I don’t see any fur and claws,” she added cuttingly, “but I think I could guess who the beast is.
I love you, Lois.

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It was the Dark One, now, stalking toward Clark,
Not good, Clark.

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There was no way, she thought with a sinking heart, that even *she* would be able to stop Rumplestiltskin now.
Wait, what? You stopped here?!?! How evil!


Battle On,
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"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent

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