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Um... So, she just took Nigel on a joyride, shot him in the back, and left him to be picked up by the cops? huh Does the "Exec offices" that Nigel mentioned that Lois could access through the parking garage mean the LexCorp exec offices?

I have no idea what Lois has planned for Lex. That should be interesting.

Poor Clark. He learns that Lois might love him and now is surely headed off to a long stint in jail. Well, isn't that his luck? Good thing he has a long life ahead of him to wait until she's let out of jail.


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HA! Its about time somebody got the drop on Nigel! Still it would have been fun to watch Clark gently put the old bully in his place.

Now we come to the confrontation between Lex and Lois - let the games begin!


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What a twist! Shooting him before he even said anything other than Lex's name. Pretty smart too how she had Nigel drive her to Lex's office directly almost. Can't wait for more!


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This has been a fun and interesting ride so far.

I do wonder how you plan to get Lois out of a long stint in prison for the felony crimes she has committed.

Being that all her 'victims' are criminals perhaps they won't press any charges... nah.

Tank (who says it's probably a good thing that Lois is going to confront Lex next because she probably doesn't have too many more haircuts left for her)

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Hi, y'all! Comments on comments follow.

Virginia, remember that Lois still thinks she's dying. That means that she's going to do some crazy things, like shoot Nigel after he's given her the final confirmation she needs to know who's running the whole shebang. And what she has planned for Lex shouldn't happen to a weasel.

Morgana, that's an interesting phrase to use here, seeing that Lex challenged Superman with it back in the pilot ep. This is sure to be a bang-bang play, to borrow a sports metaphor.

More is coming, Mouserocks. And there is bound to be an interesting discussion between Lex and Lois ahead.

Tank, you've hit on a novel way to end a story - keep giving Lois haircuts until she runs out of hair. I chuckled aloud. And the fact that her 'victims' were already criminals will figure in her final disposition.

Next chapter up in moments!


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