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#96622 07/27/13 11:34 AM
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Questions, comments, suggestions? What do you think?

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"Oh, you can’t help that," said the Cat: "we’re all mad here. I’m mad. You’re mad."
"How do you know I’m mad?" said Alice.
"You must be," said the Cat, "or you wouldn’t have come here.”

- Lewis Carroll, Alice in Wonderland
#96623 07/27/13 02:20 PM
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I haven't read HG (yet, yes people are still pestering me) but this has me riveted!

So far so good!!


"It's the mythology of a sun god who wished he was a man because he saw something so great in us.
It's the story of a hero who could move whole worlds and see through stars and hear a whisper on the other side of the planet...
...and who fell in love with a storyteller." - ashmaht (x)
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I am in total agreement with Kismatt, this story is riveting. Each panel allows us to visualize Clark's history while still propelling us forward.

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Clark was all too aware that there was a sizable chink in his invulnerability. The night he had arrived in his parents’ wheat field, the rocket had been accompanied by a meteor shower consisting in large part of glowing green stones. Chunks of it had fallen all over Panem, some of it embedding itself in the earth and other pieces lying on the surface of the ground. It had quickly become a popular item for jewelry amongst Capitolites and even the residents of the career districts.
This is new. Kryptonite as jewelry. It also gives us a glimpse of the kind of people who inhabit the Capitol and the Districts close by. Hungry for any new fad to occupy their minds.

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Within minutes of the end of the Reaping, a group of Peacekeepers escorted Clark and Becky into the Justice Building. Most of them concentrated on making sure Clark went where he was told, with only one prodding Becky along as she coughed and struggled not to cry.
Becky is the reason I will probably never see the movie, this is a really scary world where innocents are hunted and killed. Yet the Capitolites make it sound like a grand occasion. An indication that the government and all involved are corrupt and vile. mad No wonder revolution hangs in the air...

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Jonathan wrapped one arm around his crying wife and the other around his son. “Don’t try to be a hero, Clark. When the gong sounds, run. Get as far away from everyone else as you can.” Fearing that the room was bugged, he leaned closer, whispering so quietly that only Clark’s superhearing could pick up his words. “You can go longer without food and water and rest than the others. And whatever you do, don’t let anyone see what you can do. When you rest, be sure to secure yourself so you don’t float. There are cameras everywhere in the arena, and the last thing you need is to be seen floating.”
We sometimes forget that Jonathan is the gentle strength behind the family. His quiet useful advice given under extreme duress will I suspect be of real use to Clark in the days to come.

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“You’re allowed to carry a token from your district into the arena with you,” Jonathan told him. “Keep this with you—and remember what you’re fighting for.”
How nice and refreshing that Jonathan, not Martha, gets the last word. thumbsup

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Ooh, I was wondering if they knew about Kryptonite yet. The fact that it's been used in the Hunger Games before makes this doubly challenging for Clark. And here I was thinking he could have an upper hand.... I wonder if/when Lois and Luthor will show up.

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Urgh! What position will Luthor play? Definitely one of power and privilege. Scary.


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If you haven't read The Hunger Games series, I recommend it (and not just so you'll understand this story laugh ). They're good books, among the best of the YA dystopiate novels, in my humble librarian's opinion (yes, I read lots of YA books; I'm a high school librarian, after all). I thought the movie was pretty good, but the book was better (and the movie did change a few things). There have been reams written about the books (and not just fanfic), frequently "unofficial" and some of it better than others.


"Oh, you can’t help that," said the Cat: "we’re all mad here. I’m mad. You’re mad."
"How do you know I’m mad?" said Alice.
"You must be," said the Cat, "or you wouldn’t have come here.”

- Lewis Carroll, Alice in Wonderland
#96628 07/28/13 04:42 PM
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Originally posted by Annie B.:
If you haven't read The Hunger Games series, I recommend it (and not just so you'll understand this story laugh ). They're good books, among the best of the YA dystopiate novels, in my humble librarian's opinion (yes, I read lots of YA books; I'm a high school librarian, after all). I thought the movie was pretty good, but the book was better (and the movie did change a few things). There have been reams written about the books (and not just fanfic), frequently "unofficial" and some of it better than others.
I *have* them, I just haven't *read* them. ;D I *should* have been a librarian....


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It's the story of a hero who could move whole worlds and see through stars and hear a whisper on the other side of the planet...
...and who fell in love with a storyteller." - ashmaht (x)
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In the arena, though, there was no place for kindness or compassion, and Jonathan and Martha feared what would happen to their son if he was forced to kill another tribute.
This is the essence of Superman - he would not use his powers to kill (movie aside frown ).

That was an excellent part of the "Hunger Games" books and movie - the powers that be were deliberately corrupting the youngsters. You had to kill to survive the arena. That was what made Katniss into a symbol of rebellion - when she elected to die herself rather than to kill.


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