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I always thought that glass door at his apartment was a bad idea. Good thing Lois thinks quickly on her feet.

Clark better make sure he double washes that suit before giving it back to Superman.

Hmmmm, it does make wonder what happened AFTER the kiss though. Presumably something super.

Delightful. Very funny.

...she deserves someone else then? Who, you?

Clark: No. Please tell me it's not true.

Hmmm. That sigh could be of relief.

Clark: It's just me that she's "cheating" with no biggie.

I loved this so much, it was hilarious!

Very cute. I've always wondered why Clark leaves his curtains open so much. It seems like he's just asking for trouble.

I like the way Clark's kiss at the end convinced Jimmy that it had been him the first time, too. That's quite a distinctive kiss!

Great story! Lois's fast thinking saved the day.

Andreia

This was really cute! One thing is for sure, Jimmy's life has never been uneventful as long as Lois and Clark are around!

Clark: Curtains are great for so many things!

Like capes! "Doth mother know you weareth her drapes?"

Fun story! I thought for sure they were going to have to tell Jimmy, forgetting that this was a secret *saving* challenge.... Well done though! I started cracking up as soon as I saw where you were taking this... Lois' nervousness was perfectly well done, too!

Thanks for your comments

Lois always saves the day. Haven't you realised that by now ... *laughs*

Definitely not. Jimmy would probably die of boredom if it wasn't for Lois and Clark.

So funny.

I did have this story in my head turning into a revelation at first ... then I realised how I could turn it on its head instead and I think it's even better that way. Glad you saw Lois's nervousness. She was purposefully acting that way to make it more believable to Jimmy.

Good one! Adorable!

loved this story.

One think though this It should be "I always had this", even if she is measuring her words, and unsure, Lois would have the tense right. I had to reread the end of that paragraph "she rushed out as quickly as possible" to realize you mean she was talking fast and not that she left the room.

I am glad Clark let Lois handle this.

Now the big question is, what did come next after Lois and Clark kissed? My first reaction was they did even more intimate things. However, for Lois's story to need him to have not seen more, the bigger threat is if he floated her.

Although it does bring up the question, how does Lois get kissed multiple times by both Clark and SM and not realize they are one and the same? If Jimmy can tell it from seeing the kiss, why didn't Lois from feeling it.

The one counter argument is maybe the kisses were enough different from SM and CK that they did not seem the same to Lois.

Or maybe Clark should just speed change out of the suit before kissing Lois.

Hmm, which leads me to the conclusion that Lois may be telling more truth than lie. Clark was probably in the SM suit because it is fulfilling some Lois fantasy to kiss him in that.

Lois:I like how tight it is. It allows me to get closer to him, and see more that I am having an effect on him.

I can't believe that Jimmy wouldn't figure out that CK=SM when he notices how well Clark fills out the Suit. Also, if Lois told Jimmy that Clark-in-the-Suit was kissing her, doesn't Jimmy wonder why he thought Superman was kissing Lois?

But then again, Jimmy isn't the sharpest crayon in the box.

OR...

He did figure out that CK=SM and has decided to keep quiet about it.

Thank you

Ooo, thanks for that catch.

As for what came after ...there's a good chance that it covered both 'intimate' and 'superpowered'.

Their kisses were actually fairly well spaced out and rare to start with. Once she'd been kissing Clark on a regular basis I'm guessing a kiss from Superman would have given the game away. As for this kiss ... I went with a visual movement that could be recognised.

Well, yes. As well as this story getting them out of telling Jimmy the truth ... it's quite possible that it fulfilled some fantasy for Lois.

Hey, for a small moment, he did start to think down the right path ... but Lois steered him away.

Iothealias!

Justin's Jimmy was not nearly as smart as Michael's Jimmy. He always seemed like a gopher, whereas Michael portrayal was more like annoying, but cool younger brother.

Anyhow, still a really cute story.

AHAHAHAHHAHA! Poor Jimmy. That truly was a stroke of brilliance on Lois's part.

That works well - especially when you consider how many people must dress up as superheroes in worlds that really have them, it has to be one of the top fantasies.

Hi Victoria!

Something like SLV?

Yep. Lois and Superman got a little bit of Jimmy iInterruptus.

Wouldn’t it be awkward if Dan where still around or it was actually a Lois clone?

Jimmy is really not thinking clearly. Why would Lois and Superman have their tryst in Clark’s apartment unless he was invited, too?

Just the cape? :p

Translation: Lie.





Fun one!

Michael

Checking over what I've posted for the year and there are FDK I never got round to replying too. AAARGH!! *runs around screaming like a little girl*

Yeah, he's also very trusting of Clark and Lois ... their explanation makes sense to him ... almost ... he questions it for all of two seconds.

Thank you.