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FDK-Unfinished Business 9/? #9799 01/10/04 08:17 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel OP Kerth
OP daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Hmmm, why do I suspect that she's not Lois? "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK-Unfinished Business 9/? #9800 01/10/04 08:35 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. Quote “Superman, on my wedding day, my soon-to-be husband, the richest man in Metropolis, the founder of many of the city’s most beautiful and beneficial buildings plummeted to his death, because you decided not to save him. In doing this, you’ve caused me personally a lot of heartache in the three months since. Now I... the people of Metropolis want an answer. Where were you on the day that Lex died?” This is not good. Clark should sense is not Lois. The real Lois better get a good alibi. What is Clark thinking? More soon, please. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK-Unfinished Business 9/? #9801 01/11/04 04:25 AM
Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 57 Canada Jocelyn Brant Freelance Reporter
Jocelyn Brant Freelance Reporter Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 57 Canada	As always, Sara, your work is superb. I have one, albeit minor, flaw to point out: The length... Now I know you've heard the trendy talk about wanting parts to be longer, but thats why it's a "trend" -- everyone wants it right now. When it gets to the point where no one wants longer parts, we'll pass along the memo. Until such a time... work on it. Loved the story though! -Jo P.S. I'm the only exception to the above trend.

Re: FDK-Unfinished Business 9/? #9802 01/11/04 12:27 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 943 sunny California KathyM Features Writer
KathyM Features Writer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 943 sunny California	Sara, this is just wonderful. Poor Clark. Yes, I know that he was a lunkhead months ago when he ran out on Lois during the kiss, but he's just devastated over what's just happened with Lois at the Planet, and now he's got this public scene to go through with "Lois". He needs a hug. I love how you're twisting the episode elements of Madam Ex - I can't wait to see what you do next... Kathy "Our thoughts form the universe. They always matter." - Babylon 5

Re: FDK-Unfinished Business 9/? #9803 01/14/04 12:55 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 767 usa merry Features Writer
merry Features Writer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 767 usa	Sara, great part too short merry

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