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Re: FDK: Under the Spotlight (1/1) #98537 01/03/14 05:26 AM
Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England KatherineKent OP Top Banana
OP KatherineKent Top Banana Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England	Quote Originally posted by Morgana: Katherine This might be one of those times when you gotta write a sequel. Under the spotlight deserves a wider treatment! It seems that some people want to know why Clark revealed himself at 18 - that would be the prequel - and some want to see Lois and Clark get together - that would be the sequel. How much am I going to get 'bugged' by people for these two? KatherineKent/Victoria Lois: "You put up with me for the same reason I put up with you. It's because I'm completely in love with you." Clark: "And I love you ... Did we just make up?" Lois: "I think so."

Re: FDK: Under the Spotlight (1/1) #98538 01/03/14 06:48 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,804 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,804 Likes: 30 Somewhere on the East Coast	A lot! Consider that the ultimate compliment to have your fellow FoLC's looking for both stories. Think Kerth. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Under the Spotlight (1/1) #98539 01/03/14 08:32 AM
Joined: Aug 2012 Posts: 256 Hazelwood, MO USA Kismatt Hack from Nowheresville
Kismatt Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Aug 2012 Posts: 256 Hazelwood, MO USA	Consider this an offical "BUGGING YOU" post! does her best Oliver impersonation More, please? "It's the mythology of a sun god who wished he was a man because he saw something so great in us. It's the story of a hero who could move whole worlds and see through stars and hear a whisper on the other side of the planet... ...and who fell in love with a storyteller." - ashmaht (x)

Re: FDK: Under the Spotlight (1/1) #98540 01/03/14 10:21 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,070 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,070 Likes: 31	Hi Victoria! Quote Thanks. Now - did the story live up to it or not? Yeah, I was entertained throughout. It was very well executed! Quote They are cheering for the next guy about to come through the door. You know, the one that is actually the main character. But the mayor has already entered… CLARK: Quote Well, maybe there's a tiny smidgen of attraction ... You mean like this? Quote Yes she has a separate plan to the show - but she's professional enough to run the 'show' correctly while working on the state of her own heart. What Lex hears: “She’s a professional.” Quote Quite a devious mind you have there Michael. I’m blaming Virginia and her “As the Cape Flaps”… Quote Well, I couldn't actually see Luthor approving a visit by the Man of Steel, could you? Yeah. But it does make it hard to explain to the noisy reporter lady… Quote Maybe it would have helped if she had taken him backstage before the show? <W is shocked by the type of ideas an ER can come up with> What? I’m sure she would have been able to ply him in the most intimate ways. Erm…I mean she would have been able to ply the most intimate secrets out of him that way. Quote Hey ... he wouldn't necessarily take her up on the offer, but he wouldn't be annoyed at her attentions!!!! So…gay, then? Quote Ooooh. Nice idea. ponders Quote Maybe when she was a teenager ... now she's trying to kill those thoughts. Unfortunately, these thoughts are about as hard to kill as the guy they’re centered around. Quote He could go as Krampus. Also, why isn’t Lois dressing up as a Naughty Elf for the run? I'm guessing there's plenty that want to see that... Quote It's not really dirt. In the end, even if she is right, all it proves is that the Superman Foundation has lousy administration. Well, countries have fallen over less… Quote What’s going on? He's extremely unhappy about the orphanage. He's speed-read through the file Lois tossed across and it has greatly upset him. Yeah. I expected him to be worried because he’s actually hidden something. Or realized that something nefarious was going on. Quote "Welcome back. While we were off air one of my guests disappeared for a minute." Lois turned to the man who had been the most troublesome guest ever. ER: [Laugh] W: raises eyebrows What? Wasn’t I supposed to laugh? Quote That’s the easy part. The paperwork, though… Oh yeah it took him all of 2 seconds to sort it into piles on the desk. See? 0.1 second to get home, 20x as long to read the stuff… Quote It's the way cannon Lois defends ... by attacking. And what she's actually defending is her heart. Quote Actually, how she came across to the audience is ... what the readers think. Basically the readers are the audience. Well…Clark certainly had no clue. But between Mr. Sole-Savior-Of-The-Universe and his crushing and Ms.-I’ll-kill-him-or-I’ll-snog-him it’s hard to form an informed decision how she came across to normal folk. Quote squints eyes Are her ideas not good enough for you that you laugh at them? Well…they do lack a certain kind of Evil Mastermind type of planning… Quote Uh ... in the sequel? shrugs Wasn't it a happy enough ending for you? I thought it was sweet - their private conversation in the corridor. Yeah…it was sweet. But it’s still like LnC ending after the Pilot. Or possibly even after HoL. Besides, ever since LnC didn’t get a 5th season, FoLCs are a sucker for sequels Quote How much am I going to get 'bugged' by people for these two? There's a happy tradition of stake-outs on the boards... Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Under the Spotlight (1/1) #98541 01/03/14 11:58 AM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Quote Originally posted by KatherineKent: How much am I going to get 'bugged' by people for these two? I'd love to see a sequel AND a prequel (not necessarily in that order), but I'm willing to let your muse get the stories to your satisfaction before posting. Quote Originally posted by Darth Michael: Quite a devious mind you have there Michael. I’m blaming Virginia and her “As the Cape Flaps”… Hey! Oh, wait. Nah, that's probably a pretty accurate description. Never mind. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK: Under the Spotlight (1/1) #98542 01/19/14 06:36 AM
Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England KatherineKent OP Top Banana
OP KatherineKent Top Banana Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England	Quote Originally posted by Morgana: A lot! Consider that the ultimate compliment to have your fellow FoLC's looking for both stories. Think Kerth. Thank you. Quote Originally posted by Kismatt: Consider this an offical "BUGGING YOU" post! does her best Oliver impersonation More, please? sigh 'Bug' away ... but please also find me some extra hours/days in the week to write in. Quote Originally posted by Darth Michael: Hi Victoria! nods Michael. Quote Quote Well, maybe there's a tiny smidgen of attraction ... You mean like this? A giant sinking black hole ... yeah I think that might be the level of attraction. I'm also guessing that both of them are past the event horizon. Quote Quote Maybe it would have helped if she had taken him backstage before the show? <W is shocked by the type of ideas an ER can come up with> What? I’m sure she would have been able to ply him in the most intimate ways. Erm…I mean she would have been able to ply the most intimate secrets out of him that way. Hmmm, you know ... Lois' fantasies .. er dreams ... later on that night might venture into 'backstage' territory, and the idea of accidentally bumping into him, leading to ... Quote Quote Hey ... he wouldn't necessarily take her up on the offer, but he wouldn't be annoyed at her attentions!!!! So…gay, then? sighs and shakes head Tut tut Quote Quote Maybe when she was a teenager ... now she's trying to kill those thoughts. Unfortunately, these thoughts are about as hard to kill as the guy they’re centered around. Spot on! Quote Quote Quote What’s going on? He's extremely unhappy about the orphanage. He's speed-read through the file Lois tossed across and it has greatly upset him. Yeah. I expected him to be worried because he’s actually hidden something. Or realized that something nefarious was going on. Nah, nothing nefarious, just our boy scout that has the weight of the world on his shoulders. Quote Quote Actually, how she came across to the audience is ... what the readers think. Basically the readers are the audience. Well…Clark certainly had no clue. But between Mr. Sole-Savior-Of-The-Universe and his crushing and Ms.-I’ll-kill-him-or-I’ll-snog-him it’s hard to form an informed decision how she came across to normal folk. Michael </font><hr /></blockquote><font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Okay, okay. I have a couple of pages down for the prequel ... but that's it for the moment. KatherineKent/Victoria Lois: "You put up with me for the same reason I put up with you. It's because I'm completely in love with you." Clark: "And I love you ... Did we just make up?" Lois: "I think so."

Re: FDK: Under the Spotlight (1/1) #98543 01/25/14 11:58 PM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,070 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,070 Likes: 31	Quote A giant sinking black hole ... yeah I think that might be the level of attraction. I'm also guessing that both of them are past the event horizon. Quote Hmmm, you know ... Lois' fantasies .. er dreams ... later on that night might venture into 'backstage' territory, and the idea of accidentally bumping into him, leading to ... LOIS: CLARK: Quote quote: Hey ... he wouldn't necessarily take her up on the offer, but he wouldn't be annoyed at her attentions!!!! So…gay, then? sighs and shakes head Tut tut What? What? /points at often in media presented sterotype/ Quote quote: squints eyes Are her ideas not good enough for you that you laugh at them? Well…they do lack a certain kind of Evil Mastermind type of planning… I guess so. They are more ... desperate single woman? Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

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