Thanks for the feedback, Colleen.
Originally posted by ColleenMA:
Definitely made me laugh - just what WOULD Superman do about a pesky reporter who constantly interrupted his life yet WASN'T the woman of his dreams?
That's the exact question I asked myself when I read the challenge that inspired this story. Since on the show and pretty much almost every other adaptation of Superman Lois is the love of Superman's life, it's not much of a problem for him to drop what he'd doing for her. I imagine, though, that if he was married to another woman, Superman frequently having to save Lois would make the woman in his life just a little unhappy.
Liked Lana's reactions, and I found the closet scene to be hilarious. Poor Clark, caught in the middle!
I'm happy to hear that you saw the humor of the story. That's certainly what I was going for.
Incidentally, since this thread was bumped up, I thought I would mention that I have been typing up a few of my ideas for a sequel, but everything hasn't quite gelled together the way I want it to as of yet.