Hi Sara!
*Squeeeeee*
erm...
/embarrassed about the 'squeeee'/
Oh, look, FDK!
*squeeeeeee*!!!
but I was like, I said I would read more stuff by Michael because Don’t You Dare was so awesome
and this was only 6kb…so any angst or whatever couldn’t be too bad.
Hmm...yes...I certainly need to go and study at the masters' feet on how to do 6kB of angst, too
Well… HOODWINKED. I was hoodwinked.
And I was a bit peeved (only mildly so) because I don’t like being tricked, so I just HAD to go back and re-read and figure out just how I’d been tricked…and instead of feeling any sort of justified or whatever I was searching for, I was just shaking my head and marveling at how you did it.
Thank you! I may not be good at doing card tricks and I promise that I never made Lady Liberty disappear in New Troy harbor, but I do love myself the unreliable narrator. I also read A Song of Ice and Fire the past couple of years before doing this story, so...
Like Lynn said, there were one or two lines that were slightly “off” but I just brushed by as “not-perfect” characterization and moved on.
Yes, and I dare say, those had been intentional. There was, after all, no reason to have the warden be slightly obese or press home some slightly more arrogant point of view on something. After all, I'm an honestly unreliable narrator.
Hah! You showed me! WELL DONE, sir!
Thank you, I'm very happy you had fun with this little nugget.
Michael
I also got some (hopefully) entertaining bits on the 