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#301627 01/31/25 07:56 PM
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90sTVfangirl did a much better job with this prompt but here's my contribution. Let me know what you think!

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Awww! I love that song by Chicago! It sums up perfectly their relationship. Honestly, no one can blame Lois for being upset with him. He took a terrible risk getting in front of a bullet while powerless. Clark's way of saying he's sorry is so smart and romantic.

Thank for putting instant messaging in the story. What a blast from my corporate days!

Yay! So happy to see you are continuing this awesome series.


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Wow. A whole episode of action crammed in there! Short, sweet and well done!


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I love that they have known each other for 18 years at this point!

Also Lois mad at Clark is always fun for me. Well, not sure fun is the right word. But he can dense at times and deserves her wrath.

I wasn’t sure I knew the song but I looked it up and yes I knew it! Suits them well. ❤️

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This one is real cute.


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Hi Amanda!

Let’s see…

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They’d argued about it all the way back from Smallville – from the rental to the plane to the taxi. They never should have gone, she said. He shouldn’t have been anywhere near there.
Yes, they could have made it all vanish.

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It was too risky. He could have been killed. She could have lost him!

Why couldn’t he understand that?!
Look at the kettle doing the potting.

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Clark had even avoided being exposed to Kryptonite the first time.
Awwww

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How could something as serious as kryptonite have actually slipped his mind? Men!
rotflol
Perhaps Lois was looking particularly domestic?

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The Kryptonite weakened him, made him vulnerable. But that didn’t stop him from jumping in front of her when Trask pulled his gun. The sheriff wasn’t there this time to stop him.
Oh boy…

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And it didn’t stop her from being mad at him for taking such a stupid risk.
Guess someone’s sleeping on the couch tonight?
LOIS: Now don’t be hasty!

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########: Even lovers need a holiday far away from each other.
She’s not gonna like this.

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It’s a song! Lois realized suddenly. She was pretty sure this one had played at her senior prom.
Right. Songfic.

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It might have worked better if it was actually sung but then… Clark can’t sing.
rotflol

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She really couldn’t stay angry at him for long.
Maybe if he decides to break up with her for her own good again?
LOIS: Nah. I now got kryptonite, know he doesn’t mean it, and know where he lives.

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“Come on. We’d best stop playing around with the messenger and get this story written up or Perry will have our hides.”
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Very inspired adaption. I enjoyed the flashback tangents.

wave Michael


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