Great part. Lois feelings are well described.
The irony of the situation was that, even though Clark was the one who’d behaved deceitfully, she was blaming herself. It was almost as if it didn’t matter that he’d lied, but that she’d been taken in by the pretence.
Well, she must have a credit that she did give him a chance to tell and he missed it.
Was there ever a revelation in situations that are more unfavorable to Clark? You describe superbly how Lois who is hurt by clark's deception can't now believe her own eyes and judgment: if he seems to be sad, how can she tell it's not an act?
Is there no hope for those two? Only if Lois sees Luthor as he is...Or is Lois going to remember Clark's declaration of love and somehow let it touch her heart and understand she has seen him as he is in *both* disguises.
Lois should tell Clark that Luthor knows.
