Very interesting, Gerry!
I loved 'Raisins', so if this has anything like the same kind of mood, I'm sure I'll enjoy this too. And you've got off to a great start. Mayson's vehement dislike of Superman never made all that much sense; her explanation was okay, but not too convincing in a world where everyone else loved what he did. You've actually given her a real reason to hate him, and it works. It hurts too - I'm sure Clark is going to beat himself up over it!
I don't know where you're going with this, but so far I'm buckled in ready for the ride.
Wendy
