Oh Boy, a new story by Gerry.
This could prove interesting. I think as it evolves we will really see the contrasts and comparisons between Lois and Mayson.
I'm not sure that you really needed to provide a
'reason' for Mayson to hate Superman. I feel her dislike of vigilante style justice, with her being a duly deputized member of the law enforement community, was more than enough. Adding the 'parents' thing seems a bit forced, though it does allow for more vehemence in her feelings.
Tank (who thinks it's time for Lois to show up)
