Oh, thankyou, thankyou!
I'm just glad I didn't totally screw up.

It's nice to know I got Lois in character.
/me breathes sigh of relief.
Part 2 is in the works. I was planning on waiting 'till next week to post it, but then, I have this thing with impatience...so who knows?
Did I mention I'm kind of making this up as I go along? I mean, I have a general outline, but I'm really, *really* going to need a lot of input from you wonderful, kind, smart, intelligent, *super* FoLCs.
Also, please please *please* feel free to point out any stupid mistakes, like someone having chicken pox twice or Superman saying "to the Batmobile, Robin!"
Again, thanks!
