Labrat I think I now where lovesuper was going with that. I think it was ment for Cat to say that.
Oh, I fully realised it was meant to be dialogue, Lisa. But it still makes no sense, no matter who is speaking the dialogue.
You need to complete the sentence 'to the bloodied pocket of Luthor's' before you add any dialogue.
Luthor's what?
That's a gap which needs to be filled.
LabRat
