Wow jojo! Sorry I didn't see this until now ... but your challenge and the snippet you wrote here are *very* intriguing! thumbsup I don't have much "free time" or I'd be happy to beta it for you, but if someone else doesn't offer to beta or help you write it let me know and maybe we can work something out. I think this is an *awesome* idea for a story!! laugh

"A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." Chris Reeve

"Whatever comes our way, whatever battle we have raging inside us, we always have a choice. It's the choices that make us who we are, and we can always choose to do what's right." Peter Parker

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