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You see, there is supposed to be somewhat of a romance here
Hmmmm.... confused

As I told you in my fdk on your first five chapters: I only concentrated on the trekking and eating habits of your lead characters. Now I can see the possibility of an attachment, but more like mistress and pet. The woman and the dragon, staying together, hunting together. Intelligence and strength combined. thumbsup

But a romance? I'll have to let you sweat on that one all by yourself, PhoenixRising! laugh Or maybe your mom can help.

I am so looking forward how this story will develop. Please keep your Muse on the job. hyper

Ursie


Lois: Well, I like my quirks. I think they make me unique.
Clark: You certainly are unique.

Clark: You're high maintenance, you know that?
Lois: But I'm worth it!