Nice work, Sara!! I totally fell for it <g> and usually I spot that kind of twist coming from miles away... but you did a great job.
Poor Rachel. All of a sudden I like her more than I ever have... and now I'm going to be so sad, thinking of her lonely life, and

Why'd you have to make me sad, Sara?
Okay, just kidding <g> This was very well-done, so get back to writing more stuff, will ya??
PJ