I'm glad you started posting this again, Anne, because I'm really enjoying it so far.

This segment was nice setup and background and I agree with Wendy that the characters were well drawn and easy to relate to.

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Once inside, Lois turned the car on. "I'm starting to form a theory," she told Clark, turning to look behind them as she backed out of the driveway, "but there's one more thing I need to check out."
Aha - Lane is on the case. laugh Looking forward to seeing what's percolating in that brain of hers, Anne.

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Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.

The Musketeers