Liking it so far...

Couple a q's/comments:
why hasn't superman told folks that no bodies could be found? Doesn't want to raise parents' expectations? You might want to bring that up.

I thought it's kind of sad that both the dads are such jerks and both moms seem downtrodden. Maybe that could be interchanged in one couple... (For example, maybe the rich mom could be a total snob...) or maybe you've done it this way on purpose. Just a suggestion.

Also, could you use the blue arrow for new sections of your story? Don't want to miss them...

Keep writing!


Betsy Rogers
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