Hi,
Interesting start.
She reached automatically for her laptop and pulled up the story she'd saved last night. She skimmed over it, pleased with the style and the grammar, but mostly with the story. It was an awesome story. Perry would have kittens when he read it. She could already see the bold headline he would put on it - "Superman exposed!" by Lois Lane. She wished she had some pictures of Superman doing super-stuff while dressed like Clark as physical proof.
Hope Perry changes his mind and stop Lois.
If he'd had use of his powers, he'd probably be x-raying the contents of the tent right now. As it was, he would have to turn to good old-fashioned detective work...
He never encounter the kryptonite.
