I have read my shares of TOGOM rewrites and they were all well-done. And this one looks to be just as great writing as all the others. It's a new premise and one that makes me hop up and down in my chair with excitement.
I can't wait what's going to happen next, and, to be honest, I have no idea.
To Tank: there's always a chance for a happy ending. The question is only how many thousands of parts it will need to get there!
At the worst give Lois a few years and she'll get over the 'betrayal'... Everything is relative... :p
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