Oh... my... this story is... really, really bad, but bad is good, because this is really badfic, so I just gave you a compliment which is good even though this is really, really bad.
(Help! I think the badfic writing style is really contagious!!)
Love the confusion over the 23/24/17 children and the repeated jumping for joy!!
I'd ask for more, but I'm afraid you'd give it to me!
Irene