This is great, Wendy!
I cried (really cried) for almost the entire part, but the final phrases are almost scary: what is Lois going to think, to do, to feel? Her emotions will be so strong that she'll be able to comunicate with Clark? This must be a first: how do you say to your best friend and almost girlfriend you are so sorry she died because of you? So many possibilities with this story, Wendy, I'm very curious to see where you want to go!
Simona