He was Superman, for god’s sake! How the hell had she been able to make him move?
Interesting! Looking forward to seeing what the answer is. So like Clark, through all this, probing at his love for Lois and also knowing that he has to "act" - to get Capone. I do like how you're shifting back and forth between Clark's introspection and Lois's reaction to his grief. Liked Lois's reflection about her "crazy period", too.
Loved this last bit!
<<She hadn’t saved his life at all.
She’d died for nothing.>>
Sets up an interesting jump-off point in your fic too - could shift so easily into 'screwball comedy' here or just the opposite - follow Pam's thought and soon Clark is a dead man too. <g> So ... uh ... how dead is Lois?
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