Where on earth do I start?
You know it's a good story when there are too many fantastic bits to be able to quote them all, don't you? Loved the trip inside the new Superman's head. Loved -
loved - the double meaning here:
He drew a deep breath, tightened into a dive, and plunged.
The negotation with Lois was fun, but then when the peacekeepers turned up - ROFL!!! The scene reminded me of that bit in Finding Nemo when the school of fish are making funny shapes and discussing Nemo's Dad and Dory. The FN scene was a lot of fun, but the peacekeepers were
hilarious!And I'll join Rat in saying you do Tempus incredibly well - the timing of this was pure Tempus:
“Couldn’t have said it better myself,” he agreed.
You know, when you mentioned in passing that you were working on something, I wasn't even sure whether you meant it or not - you were so casual about it. Now we get this!
Wow.
Yay!
And...
More.Yvonne
