I'm having a tough time figuring out where to start! And that's a lovely problem, so don't feel sorry for me.

I think here.
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Two nits: Andrus and replicant
2,000 points go to rivka in our 'Duh, I Should Have Known That' category. Thank you for the catch! I needed it!

And while I'm handing them out:
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me tries not to see a parallel here... nope... no allusion to CC and Wendy at *all*...
1,000 points to Sara for picking up on something that might have been the tiniest bit intentional. Or not. That's all I'm saying.

This
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It was okay.
has no point value, but it gave me such a laugh. Loved that.

Just a few things more. The Red K observation. Really smart and really interesting, and frankly... I didn't think of it. Wondering if I should change Tempus's gem color, avoid confusion?

But this
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Red Kryptonite?! It would be the most out of this world twist if Superman's powers were transferred to Lois.
is a great idea! There's a premise all set to go, Jen. Any takers?

Last thing, really.
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I LOVE Tempus in your stories, CC, you write him so well.
Thank you, KathyM!

I want to point out that I haven't used Tempus in a year and 1/2 now, and well... I'm darn proud of my restraint. He's so much fun, it was hard to stay away.

Ok. So, we're off. And again I am so overwhelmed by and appreciative of your response. I do *not* expect to see feedback numbers like this again, really, but I'm glad for the amazingly warm welcome for part one.

Thank you so very, very much to all of you. Give yourself a little kiss from me, sloppy and I hope you enjoy!

I'm going to start flinging this monster, which, btw, is Liz's birthday fic! (So glad you knew that, Liz.) Part two coming up.

CC

You mean we're supposed to have lives?

Oh crap!

~Tank