Okay, so I've read the first section... you're off and running to what could be an absolutely fascinating plot. Love the old "you have to share a hotel room" trick from Perry. And the fact that this has an nfic version is encouraging, considering that Lois will be half a world away from Lex but right next to Clark.
And I can foresee a Nigel mix-up with the makeup/passport bags
(and I just now accidentally typed password before correcting it to passport
)
Anyway, I haven't time to read more now, but I will read the rest later today...
PJ
