Yay, you're posting! I'm so glad because I think you did a great job on this story. (Says Kathy the BR.
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You already know how happy I was with it, so I'll just respond to a couple of the comments.
6 lbs isn't that small. On the smaller end of the normal spectrum, I think, but not abnormally small, especially not when Lois herself is often described as "petite."
It is when the pregnancy lasted for 12 months, LOL!
And for the record, I had five ultrasounds with my first pregnancy, and never found out the sex of the baby before she was born. The early ones were done too early to tell, and by the later ones, the techs saw in our file that we were electing not to find out. But I have definitely had friends who wanted to know, but couldn't, because the baby was lying wrong. Murphy's Law, I guess.
So anyway, that part of the story didn't raise any eyebrows for me.
Great job, Sarah! I'm enjoying reading the feedback since I enjoyed the story so much myself.
Kathy
