A nice story smile Well done, Sarah! thumbsup Good to see your writing again... (and I believe you have "Lois and that cat" still pending, no? <--- not so subtle nag)

I loved the idea. It's original and very well handled with! Kudos! clap clap

I kinda have trouble with Jonathan giving Clark and Lois that speech... but it might just be because, as Paul said, Martha is usually the one attracting all the attention. And, when you get to think about it, it's not that strange for Jonathan, after all. (Not making sense? Sorry.)

Anyway. It was excellent, and I'm looking forward to your next story!
See ya,
AnnaBtG. smile

What we've got here is failure to communicate...