Thanks for posting these together <g>
There was a lot to like in this. Again, great phrasing:
The sun refused to melt the ice that had frozen Lois to her spot.
and
Her eyes turned back to where her vision had clearly committed treason.
I love how the ending parallels the beginning.
Love of matrimonial proportions.
The two-word note at the end was just perfect.
So... when are you writing the next one?
PJ
p.s., it's "past" not "passed"
