frigging the best piece of writing i've read on here. if this doesn't win an award, someone needs to be fired. are you professional?
a lot of the writing on here is too fast paced, all talk and not enough thought in people's heads, not enough description. this was excellently balanced, with imaginative, original descriptions and word combinations. and something I've never been able to do---A GOOD TITLE! someone else used the excuse of "cheese of the month" and it made me laugh, and here's a story with that as the title!
very well done overall.
