I tried to wait it out so I could read the entire story in one sitting. Then I wouldn't have to deal with cliffhangers. But waiting for 16 parts! I couldn't do it. Now I kind of wish I had. This is heartbreaking! But so good! You are doing such a wonderful job laying out everyone's emotions and making it so real. I'm in awe. I am desparetly hoping that the next part brings the two of them together and the secret out the window.
~Kristen
Joey: If he doesn't like you, then this is all just a moo point.
Rachel: A moo point?
Joey: Yeah, it's like a cow's opinion, you know, it just doesn't matter. It's "moo."
Rachel: Have I been living with him for too long, or did that all just make sense?
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