I love your story.
In the four first part, youdescribed admirably the feelings of loss and grieves of Lois, and this fifth part is just really great.
We have briefly but efficaciously the other side of the story: the feelings of Clark. And we have too a great cliffhanger.
I just want to read right now what will happen when they will wake up. That will be something !
You post the next part tomorrow, that is ? OK, that will be hard, but I guess I can wait until tomorrow.
Great part.
