Ooh! Very clever idea using the song that Lois sang in the show!
/me snickers at the "millionaires to cabbies" (or is it caddies?) line
*ahem*
And I really love that you used the HiM kiss for the last line. It fits so well. Because, really, isn't that one of the moments Lois realized (even though she wouldn't admit it to herself) that maybe she did have a crush on Clark?
Maybe I'm analyzing too much.
Anyway... those were just the moments that stuck out at me, but overall some really great lyric matches, and such a cute idea!
Sara (who thinks she needs to rewatch a few eps... ASU and... can you believe I just sat here for a good few minutes trying to think of the episode from which this song came? I feel dumb now. :rolleyes: )
