WONDERFUL!!!!!! A wedding!!! I KNEW you wouldn't keep David away! You scared me though, w/ your last comment in the FDK for part 13!!
Anna, who are you?" David whispered.
This line, for me, was the just the best!
It carries so much weight and emotion, and it's superb because while David needs to know this, Anna herself needs to know it too. She finally needs to be ready to answer this question for herself. It was a fantastic line. It was short, but just SO intense!
Gerry, this was a great story! I didn't think I could get so attached to a love story between people that were NOT Lois & Clark. You wrote David and Anna so well! And it was icing on the cake that the Lois and Clark story was great too! So the story promised a lot all around! Especially for a sap like me. Great mystery, great characterization, great new characters/love story, great STORY
~NICOLE
