Ditto about the title! After reading this part, it's perfect!
This is such an original idea to base a story around. I never really thought about how much he lost control in the first season, breaking phones and clocks and floating at the ball and whatnot. I can already see this is going to be a creative and fun story!
I'm here for the ride!
~NICOLE
ps- I also thought it was too short
So maybe you should post the next part soon to make up for it!!
