Ditto to what Rat said!!! Too short, but definitely a great hook! Which, by the way, just so you know... I'm not suppose to be reading fic. I really don't have the time right towards the end of the semester. I was just taking an innocent little peek since I, too, agree with Wendy that you should be writing (I've always enjoyed your fdk posts!). That was the plan - just a tiny peek to see what it was about. But, no, you wouldn't let me. Hook, line and sinker! And I ended up reading the whole dang part.
Sara
