Hello, I just re finished your home series for the nth time. Finally, have place to comment. The thing I love the most is how you are able to create a beautiful new world fully visualized. The little glimpses of past history that would stories themselves (I.e. grandma Lyons the commissioner, the super volcano, and the background stories of the other superheroes, I think story of Marcy and Ryan wouldn't be amiss).
I also love the characterization that you create. Marcy is a favorite character of mine.
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Ryan did ours," Marcy said. "It's a good thing he can cook because I can still burn water without any effort at all. Did you hear," she added to her sister, "Oliver is bringing a date."
"You're kidding!" Lori said. "Oliver? I thought he was a confirmed bachelor.
“Apparently he met a lady cop while they were frantically searching for you," Marcy said. "Velma something. Ronnie says he's got it bad."
"Not Velma Chow, by any chance?" Lori asked.
"I think so. Meriel got hold of him to take her the members list for Gaia's Children. Why? Do you know her?"
"I sure do," Lori said. "I guess something good came out of that mess, after all."
"And Meriel invited some friends to come by about twelve, in time for lunch, and the swimming party," Marcy added. "We've all got to be on our best behavior for them because they don't know about the family secret."
"I heard," Lori said. "Carla and Connor are friends of ours from the Daily Planet."
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I think its funny that she's reminding Lori (Superman's wife) about keeping the secret. Come on, Lori knew first! I also feel as though Lori and Marcys relationship has grown from the beginning when they seemed more at odds with each other. Love Oliver and Velma. Those two are also a great couple.
Thank you for such great stories (hopefully you're not done with that world yet). My dream would be a rebooted TV series called Superman: The Home Series.
