Hi Rac,
You do write so well and this is 'heart in the mouth' stuff. But, please, please let Kal be rescued soon. Even I can't take much more of this, and I'm only reading.
I hope the next part sees Kal freed from his prison, though, I have to say, I'm dreading the fact that Nor is interested in 'Low-iss'.
Yours Jenni