I've waited a day to post comments becuase I wasn't sure what to say - still not
This is such a strong story - so powerful when it comes to Clark, and so sad.
As always I'm impressed by your writing - that's why I feel so much sadness for your characters, I think. And also by your story telling - things are happening (although at the moment not good things
Talan is interesting!
Tricia's right: time that Clark went home to Lois.
keep writing
c
